I think that Joseph's academic strengths are: (1) that he knows what he wants clearly and has a specific career goal; (2) that Joseph has the spirit of getting to the bottom of things; and (3) that he is always hardworking and willing to cooperate with others. These strengths are critical success factors for succeeding in a graduate program. Also, Joseph demonstrated considerable potential as a researcher based on his past outstanding academic and work accomplishments. His research interests highly match our needs, and we hope that when he graduates from your school, we will have the chance to collaborate with him to get the benefits of his expertise in improving our bank. All I know is that Joseph will perform excellently in your graduate program and bring an excellent reputation to your school.